this was one of my first poems

[mortusthanatos]

I am born into this world from a salted eye
Just a teardrop pouring from a broken heart
I am one of thousands
And thousands are one
I am the evedence of a past memory
A love destroyed by a slight mistake
A dream crushed with only a few words.

The spear came upon me
As hidden as the attumn breeze
Peircing my vunerable chest
Deep into my heart it sank
Yea, the pain still throbes,
As forever I know it shall,
For eternity in agony.

mortus thanaton grey fall

[mortusthanatos]

I THINK IT IS THE STUPIDEST THING I HAVE EVER READ, R U --------?? I THINK I HAVE BECOME STUPIDER FOR READING THAT. TOU FREAKING MORON, R U GAY???

[sharpsteel (deleted)]

i didnt think it was bad.. but it made me feel like you were actually talking about your mothers broken heart as though you were her sadness instead of he child.